A long time ago...

...me and my cousins made a short film (with the help of my uncle, about 4 years ago now) and I hadn't thought about it in a long time. But then, the other day I watched it again and realised that it could be quite useful for this project, since our film was in fact a thriller. . Instead of showing it to anyone (no-one will ever see it since you know, I was in it and it's thoroughly embarrassing), I thought that I would have another look at the opening and then blog something about it :)

**Update (08/11/07): Added some screencaps from the opening. They're a bit rubbish quality since it wouldn't work when I tried to screencap the video on my computer, so I had to use my digital camera to take pictures of the TV screen... **

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So the film starts with a black screen, then the music starts. Then the opening credits start and there are 4 titles (all of which appear over black screens) saying:

1. "Stephens Motion Pictures"


2. "in association with"


3. "minidrama productions"


4. "presents..."


5. "Death Diary" (that, was the film's name... I realise that I didn't mention that earlier...)

The audience is then introduced to two young female characters (meeee, and my cousin) who are sitting at a bus stop (during the day) having a conversation about a television show. Then one of the girls' (I'll call her Girl Number 1 for the purpose of this blog) mobile phone rings, and the other girl (Girl Number 2) continues to play a game on her mobile phone. Girl Number 1 picks up the phone and then tells Girl Number 2 that it's their dad on the phone. Girl Number 2 then tells Girl No. 1 to put him on speakerphone.


The audience then hears the father's voice telling the two girls that their grandmother has fallen sick, so their aunt has gone to stay with her, and the girls will have to stay with their grandmother too. So then Girl No. 2 protests saying "But Dad, Grandma's crazy!" and Girl No. 1 says "Yeah, and we haven't been there in ages". The reason behind the girls going to stay with their Grandma is then explained when their dad says "There's no-one else you can stay with and I've got a plane to catch". The Girl 1 then says goodbye and hangs up the phone. Both girls walk away from the bus stop and start to make their way to their grandmother's house.

The scene then cuts to the two girls walking through a pathway in a field-like area, where they are discussing the fact that they have to stay with their grandmother just because their dad has a business trip.




There is then some cross-cutting between the girls walking and a floor-level shot of another female character walking out of a front door and putting something under the door-mat.
The two girls then talk about how their grandmothers only friends are her "stupid neighbours" named Edward, Mary and Elizabeth, then Girl 1 comments that the neighbours must all be as mad as she [the grandmother is]. The two girls then meet up with their aunt (the other female character introduced earlier on), and the aunt explains that she can't look after them this weekend because their grandmother's been admitted to a hospital in Newcastle and explains that their grandmother's been "acting really weird lately", so the aunt is going to go and stay with her for a couple of days. Girl 2 says "Dad's not going to like us being alone...", Aunt Nina replies "Yeah I know, but I'll only be gone a couple of days... and I will phone him". Girl 1 then asks how they can get into the house, and Aunt Nina replies that there's a key underneath the mat (which, the audience saw being put there earlier on). The girls say goodbye to their aunt and begin to go their separate ways, but then the aunt stops and says to the girls: "Don't go in Grandma's room, she doesn't like people going in there".

The scene then changes to a medium shot (from inside the house) of the two girls opening the house's front door, both girls look slightly worried. Girl 1 says "You first", then Girl 2 says "Why's it always me??" and then Girl 1 says "because you're the youngest!" and pushes Girl 2 into the house, follows her in and then shuts the door (lots of shot/reverse shots here). Then there's a high angle long shot of the two girls looking up the stairs and Girl 2 commentinG "It's kind of creepy here, isn't it?".


There is then a reverse shot of the stairs and a reflection (through a mirror) of the first floor of the house. Then there's shot (taken from the same angle and distance as before) of the two girls then going into the kitchen through the door on the left. Then it goes back to the reverse shot of the stairs and the first floor of the house, a mysterious female figure (with her face unrecognisable because it's covered) comes around the corner to the top of the stairs.


Then there's some more cross-cutting between the mysterious female character walking down the stairs and the two girls having a conversation in the kitchen. The girl's then decide to go into the garden. There's a shot from inside the kitchen, looking through the window onto the two girls in the garden. The mysterious female figure then walks into the shot, facing the garden, and appears to be watching the two girls. It then cuts to the girls smelling flowers, then cuts back to the over-the-shoulder, frame-within-a-frame shot of the mysterious female character watching the girls.



The mysterious female character then walks out of the frame and the two girls are then shown sitting down on a bench at the back of the garden. Then the scene fades to black.

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Most of the dialogue in this is a bit silly, and most of the opening doesn't really seem very thriller-y. But, I do think that other than that it's quite good really. (And I'm allowed to say that since I didn't shoot or edit it).

The shot variety is pretty good, since lots of different distances, angles, movements and levels are used. I think the editing is really well done too, the cross-cutting works really well. The sound used is mostly diegetic, and the non-diegetic sound used helps to create tension.

But most importantly, the opening sequence helps to create enigma in very little time (the parts I've described above only take place over about 3 and a half minutes). The opening sequence raises the following questions:

1. Where has the girls' father gone on his business trip?
2. Will the girls' grandmother's neighbours (Edward, Mary and Elizabeth) become more relevant later on?
3. What happened to the girls' grandmother that made her "act really weird lately"?
4. Why doesn't the girls' grandmother like people going in her room?
5. Who was the mysterious figure on the stairs/watching the girls?

....I have to say, I never realised that this film we made would be useful for future schoolwork!